Troubled Chaos
I’d tell you how it feels like to be suddenly consumed by a violent choking force…
I’d tell you how hard it is to breathe, when you know the whole world’s crashed in your wake…
I’d tell you how my story’s going to change…. How I’ve lost the plot today…
And how I’m not able to bring myself to be picked up from a ragged destiny that awaits…..
My voice’s just tiny….
Nobody wants to listen to me…
Not even my own conscience.
I am troubled.
So deep, that I’m afraid, I’m plunging headlong into it…….
roystonjacob said,
February 6, 2009 at 6:58 pm
hey are u ref: stunt u pulled off that weekend?
Nazeeb Alam said,
February 6, 2009 at 7:00 pm
so……you’ve lost the plot today…..i.e on Jan 29……and you are “being consumed by a violent choking force”……….sounds quite dramatic and melancholy at the same time……..well, you have created suspense…..shall we ever get to know the full story??!!………and have you sounded out any of your friends…….you may find those who are willing to listen to you !!
Neethu Mary said,
February 11, 2009 at 1:01 pm
@ Roy…. nope.. it wasnt anythin abt the stunt i pulled.. dat was a happy time phase!!
thzs juz somthn else….
@ Nazeeb…. yes nazeeb.. its all abt the drama.. donchya think our whole live’s a big drama… n we’re on stage playin different roles all the time??
Karunesh said,
March 14, 2009 at 9:32 pm
Wow…i never thought u could write so well….if its original, i must say its quite impressive how u have expressed ur feelings….n i hope u have regained whatever u had lost….n everything’s fine…
Neethu Mary said,
March 18, 2009 at 9:52 pm
Karunesh.. thank you.. .well yes, it is an original… however… its not got anythin to do with any thing i’ve lost…
I was juz inspired by a state o’ emotion, and I went onto build on it..
I believe, you could only be a good writer, if u can evoke ur readers to feel every bit o’ the writing, irrespective of whether u’ve been through what u’ve written abt.. or Not..!
so yea… its truly a compliment..
Karunesh said,
March 23, 2009 at 9:42 pm
WELL I TRULY M INPRESSED!! KEEP UP THE GOOD JOB!!….n why dont u go beyond bloggin…if u hvnt already!
Karunesh said,
March 23, 2009 at 9:42 pm
thats “IMPRESSED”
Neethu Mary said,
March 26, 2009 at 1:18 am
hmmm.. I had.. once upon a time…
Had this short stint with The New Indian Express…
but i think.. to write professionally… I’d need to improve soooooo much More!!!!
And it has been quite a while since i’ve actually gotten down to bloggin full on…
ajuthomas13 said,
June 23, 2009 at 5:29 pm
seems like u hav a lot to say but the platform’s missin.. yr the opposite of me there